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team masho story 5 by ~kibasgirl1:iconkibasgirl1:



                                                 Lost
     "What do you plan on doing, Risho?" Touya said."I don't know, I'm not even sure which way home is, or another island" "so what do we do? We still have to get Jin to a doctor, even more so know that he's injured" " Fine, but if we do we'll most likely die." " I don't care" Touya picked up Jin. "Here" Touya handed Jin to Risho. "You carry him now. Might keep each other warm." " Fine" Risho took Jin and put him on his back. "Well the only way to go now is by luck." Risho said. They sterted walking forward.
     A few hours past and they were exausted. Touya stoped to catch his breath bit Risho kept walking. Touya looked around, he saw something he rather not of saw."uh, R-Risho?" Risho stoped and turned around. "What now?" "Look" Touya replied. "Risho walked to Touya. "That's?" Risho started. "yeah" Touya said. They were standing infront of human bines and bear prints. "Yep, that's a grizzly bear for sure, something I would not want to come across." Risho said turning around and walking again.
     A few more hours past. Touya and Risho heard growling. "I don't really want to know what that was." Risho said. "Then I don't think you want to turn around." Touya said back. Touya and Risho's hearts started pounding out of their chest. "Oh I see your point...Let's get out of here!" Touya and Risho ran for their lives. They hid behind an ice shaft. ''That was close." Risho said. "Great" Touya said emoly. "What?" Risho asked. "Where's the path we were walking?" "...Gah! Aww man, and we were already lost befor." "*sigh* Whatever let's just keep going." They begain to walk...again, not knowimg where they were going...again. Another few minutes of walikg Touya was taking the lead. He stoped and looked back at Risho. "How ya holding up?" Touya asked. "Fine, but Jin don't look too good." Touya ran to Risho. "I'll carry him now." Touya grabbed Jin. "um ok have it your way." Risho said breathlessly.
     Another hour past and they still never found any place they were familer to.
"That's it I can't take it any more!" Touya yeld. "What's your problem?" "We have been walking for hours and haven't made ant progress." "Touya listen-" "NO YOU LISTEN!! WE ARE ARE GOING TO DIE!! DON"T YOU SEE?! Do I have to spell it out for you?! W-E  A-R-E  G-O-I-N-G  T-" Risho coverd Touya's mouth." Touya just shut up! Just calm down, you shouting and fussing over something I can't handel is not getting us anywhere. You need to stop acting like a child." "...you're right, I'm sorry. Guess I just freaked out a bit." Touya took one steep and triped over a piece of ice. Touya fell on his face and droped Jin. 'Touya you are so embarsing' Risho thought. Jin twitched a little and woke up.'well, *now* he's awake' Risho thought. Jin didn't seem like he was awake, he seemed still knocked out, just with his eyes open. He didn't talk or move, neither did his friends, they just stared at him. A few secounds of silence Jin started coughing up blood. He cover his mouth and was chocking out of control. "What's wrong with him?" Touya asked. Risho picked up Jin but didn't say anything. "I say his body is still in shock from all that damage his body indured." [haha that's a funny word]. "so what are you saying?" Touya asked. "Well it's like his body is here but not his mind, he's awake but not. To put it simpily: He is slowly dieing." [yeah didn't know how to end this >_<]
©2008-2009 ~kibasgirl1
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I was in a hurry so I made a lot of mistakes >_< oh well.
just 2 more chapters to go :) the next one is real dramatic.ooohhh :o
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I don't know how to end chapters either. ^-^

Yay! Chapter 6!

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If I had a penny everytime I was called Hiei obsessed or crazy... I'd be the richest person in the world.
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=D
brain dead...writers block :)

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KuroFai fan for ever and proud yaoi lover and straight couple hater!! :heart: for some one :3
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I know haow u feel... I have artist block right now. Well... for a while now. I can't think of poses.

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If I had a penny everytime I was called Hiei obsessed or crazy... I'd be the richest person in the world.
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but I have a journal up that I want people to vote on which is there fav couple

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KuroFai fan for ever and proud yaoi lover and straight couple hater!! :heart: for some one :3
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I'll take a look at it.

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If I had a penny everytime I was called Hiei obsessed or crazy... I'd be the richest person in the world.
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ok

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KuroFai fan for ever and proud yaoi lover and straight couple hater!! :heart: for some one :3
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It was hard.

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If I had a penny everytime I was called Hiei obsessed or crazy... I'd be the richest person in the world.
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yeah, un
I can't deside either

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KuroFai fan for ever and proud yaoi lover and straight couple hater!! :heart: for some one :3
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poor Jin.....by the way I heard a stupid rumor that Jin is Risho's brother, sharing the same demon mother, and having different fathers. But they look very different.....not only about face.......

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The Black Bride

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